Hi guys,
I'm in the development stage of my script and would like your views on my logline if that is cool?
MONUMENTAL WORDS
An apathetic atheist investigates the sinister history of his local cemetery, aggravating an age-old feud between the Church and an ancient evil.
Logline critique please
Re: Logline critique please
Remove - Apathetic
Remove - Sinister
Remove - Aggravating - replace with 'starting' OR 'intensifying'
Remove - his local - replace with 'a'
Best Regards,
LH
Remove - Sinister
Remove - Aggravating - replace with 'starting' OR 'intensifying'
Remove - his local - replace with 'a'
Best Regards,
LH
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