Introducing several main characters during a wedding scene. To spread out the amount of CAPS and description in my sequences, I was thinking of introducing them only prior to thier resepective dialogs. So, I was thinking of something like this. Your thoughts...
An extravegant Roman wedding celebration. No expense spared. Around the banquet table, the wedding party. Young, vibrant, wealthy. Beside the GROOM, a much older man but equally patrician. He is MARCUS ARILUS. Brooding, quite. The consumate Roman General. His age writen on the lines of his face...
Listening closely, the beautiful LUCILLA. Flawless, radiant, Roman. A delicate viel covers her genuine smile.
Blah Blah, more action and descriptions...
*JUST THOUGHTS ON PAPER. PLEASE CRITIQUE MY QUESTION, NOT THE FORMAT. THANKS!*
So now you have an outline. Where do you go from here? Discuss getting past FADE IN:.
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