Need logline feedback please

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Leebo23

Need logline feedback please

Postby Leebo23 » Jun 22, 2011 10:45 am

Hi Fellow Writers,

Below is the logline for a sci-fi/crime/thriller I just finished polishing. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

An NYPD detective goes rogue to hunt the serial killer who framed him for murder, only to uncover a larger threat within the department manipulating them both.

Thanks a million,

Leeo23

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