DEATH-MATCH - Need logline/synopsis feedback please
Posted: Jul 17, 2010 11:33 am
Hi Fellow Writers,
I have recently completed an action thriller screenplay entitled "DEATH-MATCH" and would love to hear your comments on the logline and synopsis. Any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated. Also, if you'd like to read the script, I'd be happy to email it to you.
Thanks a million,
Leeo23
LOGLINE:
An ex-mercenary must stop a maniacal CEO from using his DNA to create a futuristic gladiator game designed to control every mind on the planet.
It's The MATRIX meets UNIVERSAL SOLDIER!
SYNOPSIS:
In the near-future, a massive sports gaming conglomerate is killing the world's elite fighters and resurrecting them to battle as mind-linked cyborgs in an addictive live-action gladiator game called: "DEATH-MATCH". When an ex-mercenary wakes from a coma with amnesia, he learns from a captive scientist that he is a new prototype warrior for the ultra-violent game, and the only means of escape is to fight for his life, destroy the game and take down the maniacal CEO hell-bent on using "DEATH-MATCH" to enslave the minds of millions.
I have recently completed an action thriller screenplay entitled "DEATH-MATCH" and would love to hear your comments on the logline and synopsis. Any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated. Also, if you'd like to read the script, I'd be happy to email it to you.
Thanks a million,
Leeo23
LOGLINE:
An ex-mercenary must stop a maniacal CEO from using his DNA to create a futuristic gladiator game designed to control every mind on the planet.
It's The MATRIX meets UNIVERSAL SOLDIER!
SYNOPSIS:
In the near-future, a massive sports gaming conglomerate is killing the world's elite fighters and resurrecting them to battle as mind-linked cyborgs in an addictive live-action gladiator game called: "DEATH-MATCH". When an ex-mercenary wakes from a coma with amnesia, he learns from a captive scientist that he is a new prototype warrior for the ultra-violent game, and the only means of escape is to fight for his life, destroy the game and take down the maniacal CEO hell-bent on using "DEATH-MATCH" to enslave the minds of millions.